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post=208566
Only one complaint, a personal pet peeve: squirrels in a cave??? I applaud you on the name Coco however :) great job!
Lol maybe evil squirrels would hang out in a cave? Haha well if you think it's odd I could put something else instead.
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post=208571post=208497You don't like the fence, do you think I should just make that area a wall? You see I wanted to create a balcony, if I remove the fence it will look odd with the sky just hanging there. I wish there was kind of balcony in a tileset I could use.
The picket fence looks odd. Also, there should be a comma after "Miguel." I get what you're trying to say with the verb "speaks," but I don't think it works as-is.
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post=208497
The picket fence looks odd. Also, there should be a comma after "Miguel." I get what you're trying to say with the verb "speaks," but I don't think it works as-is.
You don't light the fence, do you think I should just make that area a wall? Cause I wanted to create a balcony, if I remove the fence it will look odd with the sky hanging there.
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post=208564
I love the mapping, apart from the fence. However, I think you can change the verb. Maybe if you said "Your presence tells us" or you could keep speaks, but change what comes after it to say "Your presence here speaks volumes. You must have received the pastor's approvel". Just offering my help :) feel free to disregard
Thanks I might actually do that. The game has some really bad grammar issues I know, I'm actually thinking about having somebody else go through the game and correct it because I'm so bad at it haha.
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Oh I did sorry I just forgot to upload a new screen shot but thanks for bringing it to my attention!
Victory & Vengeance
This looks like my kind of game, I'm looking forward to download when it comes out and gets off the hiatus status. And over 10 hours of game play! I'm interested I'll be checking back.
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post=208270
The hero is standing in a suitable position and the enemy sprites match the style and size of the battler. No complaints from me.
Thanks, although I could say that the positioning of the squirrels could be a bit better I will probably work on that.
The Beginning Version 1.0 Feedback
post=208191
Success! I really like the game, I mean a lot. Although it has a few mistakes, typos, and bugs, the general layout is great! =D
Positive:
+ I really liked the story, from the beginning to the end of the demo, it was amazingly detailed. The dialogue wasn't to bad either. =)
+ I like Miguel a lot for some reason... he just seems a more interesting character than the one I began as. Maybe it's because he has more of a role I prefer a character to have.
+ The mapping is pretty good! The cave & sewers was nice and detailed, as was the city! The rock puzzle in the cave was frustrating because there's like only ONE possible way to get by it. I retried 14 times there. D=
+ The way you develop the controls! I like the scrolling menu! KEEP IT PLEASE! Nice use of the save systems as well.
Negative:
- Still a few typos and bugs. rabitZ mentioned most of them that I saw weird as well. In the kitchen of the castle, there is a game-ending bug!
- There is some mapping mistakes but I'm not perfect in this field either so they didn't bother me! =D
BY the way, nice quest log! =P
Creative that you get it from the Priest. Oh, by the way, priest sounds better than pastor to me but that's just my opinion!
Good luck and I'll play it again one more time! (already played it twice!)
Thanks for giving me some good feedback. Yeah I went over the game last night and found and removed a lot of the bugs you and Rabitz are mentioning. I might have rushed the release a little bit but the one I have uploaded now seems to be functioning better.
You can play it again if you want, the changes are a few extra monsters in the first cave, some changing around of text messages. And bugs like the fruit, the gaming ending bug, message bugs the tree priority bug.
Yeah the main character is meant to be Miguel, so I put more thought into him than Lute. Lute will join in later most likely.
lol I don't know what to think about the rock puzzle btw cause I have people telling me that it's too easy and people telling me it's too hard. Maybe I should remove it all together and make the cave long with battles? I don't know I'll think about it.
Again thanks for the feedback. I'm going to start my trial for VX tonight I'm looking forward to playing Tales of Arcadia along with some other VX games, I'll give you some feedback on it for sure!