SHADE_HUNTER'S PROFILE

author=Indra
RSW is all about feedback so here goes

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-Right away: the pre-title font is finickly to read, and looks rather silly against the real picture background. (Not to mention the music is….out of place something fierce)
-…”Life what it means to you”? Is the weird grammar intended? “In the middle of a certain death?”
-Mix of normal and tatenkai sprites is rather weird
-The writing typos and errors getting out of control and we’re not even past the intro, oi.
-…It’s final, the writing definitely needs a very good shaking and fixing.
-Oh god, nooo. The tutorial pictures have different text fonts, sizes, AND colors? Not to mention they are overall pretty shoddily done.
-Text is cut all over the place (not to mention the constant typos and writing errors in general)
-I’m sorry but the mention of using my intelligence in the face of this rampant bad presentation and writing mess is rather hilarious.
-Went a couple “game” maps before totally losing interest.

Let’s see…it’s a puzzle game? THAT PART is fine (it’s just not my thing). HOWEVER; the presentation is terrible.
The writing is…bad. There are cutoff windows and typos and a myriad of errors in the text. Presentation is shoddy, characters are…well, there, but they have no personality or interest as far as I could discern.

Simply put: the game does not compel me to play. It actually did its best to make me turn away. I am not actively interested in what happens next, nor does the gameplay feel intriguing.

I’d recommend heavily revising presentation: graphics are tolerable (mostly some resources mismatch each other such as sprites, tiles and face styles) but the writing is not. I’d address that quickly and smooth it over. The “tutorial” section also features some incredibly shoddy materials, and it turned me off from reading the actual contents, much less care about what was being said.

If you fix the overall presentation, the game will probably be fine. As it is, I could not be convinced to play past the fourth screen, since I was simply not interested.

As negative as my views on the current game build are, I hope something among the things I said is of use to you. Good luck with the game!