STARMAGE'S PROFILE

Hi Rose!! what I wish to suggest to you if you ever make a sequel is to try giving more life to your characters! xDD Now don't get me wrong, I loved the protagonist in your game "Raven" as she was easy to empathize with.. especially the love-story between her and the incubus.. but I just thought I'd give you a little piece of what I know regarding characters! xDD

Hmm, you can try imagining them first before creating them.. maybe make a note-pad of your cast and think deeply about each of their role in the game or what significance they each hold on your story/plot! but I think you were doing quite decently on this with Elementa Bellator 1.. still, just thought I'd remind you.. since you sometimes forget that one of the characters exist! xD (Nikki..) cause she only appeared like an extra sprite in the map.. I think giving her a role or significance in the game would be great.. since she's Raven's friend.. you can give her the role of Raven's closest best friend who would always stick out for her and someone Raven can trust with her inner-feelings and thoughts or something like that, and it should be fine. xDD

Now.. the most important thing when you brainstorm the cast of your game is their unique personality and identity!! What does he/she like or dislike? what is his/her motivation in life? what dreams does he/she have? how does he/she interact with the other characters and the game-world in general?.. does he/she have a strange desire for something? or what did he/she go through in the past that made him/her the way he/she is now? (though past/childhood flashbacks are not necessarily needed to flesh out a character full of life, still it has a good effect).. I don't know.. use your great creative mind to it's full potential! xDD

I wish you the very best on your second game Rose!! :D And that's all I can suggest for now! always make your characters lively, fun and interesting!! Imagine what they would be like if they existed in real life!! xDD You can do it Rose!! I believe in you! :)

Indeed! but keep faith RishiganiX! I know that once your game comes into completion, the features you planned will reach many people as it did reach me! :)

The best we can do now is to keep going on our games and maintain the fiery passion that we hold for them! :)

And especially since you have alot of cool features set up for your game, I'm sure all your effort will really pay off!! xDD :D

Of course Rose_Guardian! :) Keep it up! I'm sure you will improve alot in the future.. just don't ever stop on what you love doing the most! ;)

Hi BerryRMN!! Woww!!! Thankyou so much for playing the demo and all your kind words along with your concerns regarding the game!! xDD I am really very happy for that!! thankyou so much!! :)

Yes, actually, I'm currently working on the game balance this time, it seems it proved to be quite difficult to balance out.. But I will do my best to make it more balanced (also the prices of weapons and items.. expect them to become more cheaper in the full game! :D )

The overlapping texts in the screenshot you took at Fidel port was actually intentional, to give that awkward "Finishing each other's sentences" effect! xDD it's like when two people awkwardly talk at the same time and you don't understand what both of them said until one says "wait, okay, you first." xDD But you are actually right, I will do my best to find a way in making it read-able for the players!! :D xDD

About the bug you mentioned? you mean after River offers to help Lyrelle in getting to Mt. Elmoda and trying to go to Senna woods? hmm..

Also, many of the voices I used are mainly rips from FF dissidia! :D some from Valkyrie profile! :)

I'm very glad you that you enjoyed for the most part in the game and emotionally immersed yourself with the characters and their background (especially your comments about the story and intro) and that in itself makes me very happy and makes me more motivated to make the best out of this game as I can, as all of your concerns, comments and feedback are always extremely useful and crucial in my game's development! so you don't know how big a contribution these all are! ;)

Once again, BerryRMN! thankyou so much for taking the time in trying out the demo!! I will make sure to keep in mind all your key points and also maintain all the positives to make sure I make more positive ones in the future within the game's development! ;)

And omg!! it would be quite an honor indeed for me to see Echo607 play it!! hahaha!! though as you said it would be quite impossible! the idea itself got me excited! xDD truthfully, I am extremely flattered and humbled that my game would atleast put those games "Gaia's Melody, Reconstruction and Master of the Wind" into mind!! cause they're too good games I must say! xDD

Hi WheelmanZero!! I'm very happy you enjoyed the review as I did with your demo!! xDD It was indeed well-deserved because I can see the potentials within the demo itself already to be a good classic JRPG game!! especially the aesthetic itself!! it was very well-thought out!! xDD D

And you're very welcome WheelmanZero!! I am happy to have helped in any way through my review! :) so best of luck to you and your project!! :D xDD