CRADTH'S PROFILE

author=coolopotomus
heya! I just noticed this behemoth of a game series and was about to give it a go. I just noticed that not all of them say they are completed - should I start with this one and then go 1 2 3 4 or were some of the middle titles incomplete? Thanks!

Hello^^ glad to know someone put attention to my works. Yes, you can start with 1, and then go 2,3,4 and 5. They're connected, the next title contains a plot twist/revelation for previous one. Actually, 1st-4th titles are complete, but 3 of them are still in Bahasa, my 1st language. I'm working on the translation at the moment. Anyway, you can try downloading the English demo and give all a try,
I would love any feedback. :)

author=Rebezion
ooo this is nice.

Thank you. :D

author=Marrend
Funnily enough, I'm not particularly aware of a program (or website) that does grammar checks? I sense a Google search should reveal a number of possibilities, though.

yeah I found it by googling. I'm going to give it a try. Thank you, my friend. :)

@Marrend.
A big thanks to you, friend. :) That's really fast. Love the details in your suggestion^^ I'll submit this version with a few improvement from my own references, like this :

In the year 779 MA, a hundred knights where chosen to go on a dangerous mission by the Epsylian Council. The mission, led by an Aelther Warlord code-named "Neptune", was to occupy, a camp of Looset Empire. This particular camp was a threat to the southern territories controlled by the Kingdoms Alliance.

It is generally believed that this raid had one survivor. It was Neptune, who actually betrayed the others in the raid, but used the incident for personal gain. Alcein was one of the knights sent by the Council under the command of Neptune. He saw, first-hand, Neptune's betrayal. His faith shattered, he soon found himself wandering between the the worlds of the living and the dead.

He was revived by a demon, and made more powerful with three other souls living in his body. With his new-found power, he returns in a glorious blaze, slaying thousands, and claimed a title in his own right.

Of course, the demon that revived Alcein made a contract with him, and is fully expecting to be paid when the contract is up. Will Alcen's thirst for vengeance spark another war? Is there any way he can make peace with himself before his contract is up?

Is this correct? I do hope they accepted this time. :)

Hello^^ I need some help. It's such a long description, I'd really appreciate it if anyone could help me fixing this. Thank you. :)


If you have a second chance to save thousands lives by killing four men, what would you do...?"

++STORY++

-779 M.A-

...Hundred Knights were chosen to venture on a dangerous mission by the Epsylian Council.Led by one Aelther Warlord codenamed Neptune. They sought to ravage a camp of Looset Empire,threat to the kingdom in the south territorial....

It is believed that all of them perished on the journey. In actual fact, there's one survivor who became a traitor between them, their only commander in the Battle of the Death Valley, He's Neptune... No one sees the truth except Alcein, a Knight among the 100 mens who died in misery, his faith is crumbling in rage, his soul is wandering unrest between Sheidh world and Hell...

...One day later, Alcein is revived and becomes more powerful with four souls in his body, his sword slays thousands, he returned victorious after defeating the enemies, saved thousands lives of his people. Alcein claims the wealth and glorious title under his name. But a contract with the demon to get his 2nd life has been made, the time to paid the price has come...

Alcein must let his alter egos avenge their suffering from Aelther Warlords. The other souls hold their own grudges just like him. This undeniably act most likely thing that could trigger another war in the process. Will he fulfil the Contract for this peculiarity atonement...?


++CHARACTERS++

Alcein Fraido, a young Elite Knight who died and came back to life with a great power to win the war in the Death Valley.
Auvrelyn deiz Selishandrei, one of the best fighters in Arsei Kingdom. She's mastering the technique of the Seven Swords and almost never defeated by anyone.
Einhazar Lizecsou, a dead veteran assassin in Nouma Empire, his soul traveled around the Jugement Gate and managed to spiritually invade into Alcein's body during the Black Contract.
Balcard Goram, The third soul in Alcein's body, he's is a naive barbarian who protect the Dark Dragon Temple.
Feior Yuai, comes from Yuai Family, a famous bloodline in Archery Skills. He has also been noted to in fact be rather skilled when it comes to women.