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Screenshot Survival 20XX
A little constructive crit for you punk
I did these mockups in like 2 seconds, i would suggest not using them and doing better ones yourself.

The bottoms of your trees look weird, the leaf shadow doesnt really line up with the outline.
Your leaves? looked kind of small. Maybe toy around with larger ones, and have some overlap?
Also idk if those clumps are supposed to be leaf piles or bushes, but they don't really look like either. Might wanna go back to the drawing board on those.
^_^
Anyway I love the cutesey minimal style, but something was more charming about the more surrealy happup stuff
I did these mockups in like 2 seconds, i would suggest not using them and doing better ones yourself.
The bottoms of your trees look weird, the leaf shadow doesnt really line up with the outline.
Your leaves? looked kind of small. Maybe toy around with larger ones, and have some overlap?
Also idk if those clumps are supposed to be leaf piles or bushes, but they don't really look like either. Might wanna go back to the drawing board on those.
^_^
Anyway I love the cutesey minimal style, but something was more charming about the more surrealy happup stuff
Screenshot Survival 20XX
Revamping the desert bug city.

Just threw some WIP sprites in there for fun. Fly merchant, Silkworm Spinner, Roach Guard.
Just threw some WIP sprites in there for fun. Fly merchant, Silkworm Spinner, Roach Guard.
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Trying to get away from photoshoppy/blurry looking lighting effects and do more on the actual map itself I stead of an overlay, think I'm liking the results so far..

Screenshot Survival 20XX
The raccoon is cute, but the rest of the cave is pretty rigid.
Since you're already making custom tiles, make a corner piece at least, so its not jaggsville. This look is minimalist and cute but try to stylize it a bit more. : )
Edit: Here's an in game gif of the battle in motion. The gif make it look a little faster than it really is.

Since you're already making custom tiles, make a corner piece at least, so its not jaggsville. This look is minimalist and cute but try to stylize it a bit more. : )
Edit: Here's an in game gif of the battle in motion. The gif make it look a little faster than it really is.

Screenshot Survival 20XX
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Luchino those shadows are wayyyy too dark and too cool in color for that map imo.
I would increase their transparency and maybe shift the color a bit warmer
I would increase their transparency and maybe shift the color a bit warmer
Screenshot Survival 20XX
I'll work on adding some residual light on the surrounding trees. Thank y'all.
Erave I've been following SoA for a while now, syked you guys are kickstarting. Everything looks so tight, great job.(I still HAaAatE the battle UI, but everything else is great.)
Erave I've been following SoA for a while now, syked you guys are kickstarting. Everything looks so tight, great job.(I still HAaAatE the battle UI, but everything else is great.)
Screenshot Survival 20XX
Cutscene, Jacket and Lute rest by the fire in the Hardwoods of Carpentos. Still might add to the background.
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well its been an exciting year.
finally moved from rpg maker and now have my project started in a new engine.
now that ive got someone doing the coding ive been able to focus entirely on the design and artwork.
its come a long way in the past year, I think:
(old on left, new on right)

finally moved from rpg maker and now have my project started in a new engine.
now that ive got someone doing the coding ive been able to focus entirely on the design and artwork.
its come a long way in the past year, I think:
(old on left, new on right)













