RATTY524'S PROFILE

Tried fixing the download. I uploaded the zip file instead.

I made a game called The Secret of Ludia with RMXP. It was about a teenage girl named Mikami, who was a Fighter-in-training, going on a quest to save a woman who telepathically calls to her for help. Her father, who is a professional Fighter, decides to let her go and sends a whiny, prissy fairy named Alpha to help her on her quest. She eventually discovers what a robot is, as these stupid bots called Beebee Bots start causing trouble for her. She discovers a robot named Beetal, who unconditionally serves her and does not remember who created him or why he is even there. The whole game is centered around gradually discovering the secret behind the existence of Mikami's home planet, Ludia, which is pretty much that it was founded by a highly advanced alien race and their remainder, a mad scientist named Dr. Lue, wants to take over planet Ludia just because he feels he is superior to the current people living on the planet.
The game was complete with default RTP graphics and battle system, with no effort really put in to the monsters, except for a few graphics which clashed horribly. The game had an abundance of some stupid, sometimes juvenile humor, and a bit too much cussing with the excuse that the main character was a pretty crass gal. I remade it 2 times already, but eventually I never finished it. Here's an example of it's suck:


It's the first RPG Maker game I started, but not the first game I've made in general. I made some compilation of three dysfunctional games with Multimedia Fusion.

@Captainregal: Gorgeous.

Yoko Ogura, anyone?


27-26 year old who looks like a 15-17 year old. She's skinny as heck, but she's still one of the best looking Japanese models I've ever seen.

My playtime ended when I got to the maze, and was unable to move.

The tutorial of this game was redundant. Why was waddle dee standing around during the intro? You playtested this, right? I honestly doubt it since you left that "for betatesting ONLY" item in there, and you didn't catch a simple bug found in the intro and start of the actual game.

The map where you cross those bridges look like they were copied from KirbyWarrior's game, you even use the same music as in his game as well.

The mapping in general was passable. Regardless, you have too many little details that actually makes it annoying to move around in this game. Then I get to places like the maze and that map looks horrendous.

Your characters are... Pretty much static. They do not appear to distinguish themselves by personality and there is ultimately no reason to care for any of them, even the main hero. Storyline involvement is key to making RPGs.

Overall this was just bad, I'm sorry. Maybe if you remade this, or simply move on and start another project, you might produce a better result, learning from the mistakes you made with this game.

This thread seems more popular than the "what makes it bigger" topic. O-o