RATTY524'S PROFILE

Max... Learn to take criticism. The guys working in the industry are also making projects that take years to make, doesn't mean their stuff will get a good review. Use this to grow stronger, and try again.

Hasn't this been beaten to death enough?

I actually got farther than the intro, even got my first party member, and visited the "towns" (they looked more like camp sites than towns). Those were also the places were I ran into cheap gameoevers, and since saving is so limited in this game, you could imagine how frustrated I was getting (seriously, you answer an NPC's stupid question wrong and you get gameover for that? REEEEAL lame). I also went to that castle town place with the oppressive king, and really didn't know what to do from there. I tried uncovering the secret passage in the King's house (why is a king living in some dinky little house anyway?) but I kept avoiding it because I was getting my arse kicked by elementals, and everywhere else seemed like the "wrong" place to go.

So I actually did play enough of your game, which you should be proud of since I had the patience to even get through the beginning of it. At least you have learned something and you recognize that this game was garbage, so what you need to focus on is just make a new game.

Er? I wasn't planning to review all of the contest entries. D-:

I was desperate to make a review of one of the games on this site, and this is one that was on my mind and it was concise enough for me to remember it entirely.

About the screen, to "ascend" something is to raise it in elevation, or to climb upon something. Was your character trying to say that the girl has been carried above someone only once? I wasn't precisely sure what that meant.

And I no, I didn't recognize that the stones fell on the same tile (it looked a little too similar with the rest of them to me O_o). Regardless, while knowing your audience is important for making games, you should never assume that the player will know exactly what to do, especially when the way to play the game changes.

I can't really tell myself. The game design was so bad that I can't really tell what I was supposed to do with that game. :/