I missed that roof...
The shadow on the water's part of the tile itself, actually. Might need to edit it out manually.


Would it be difficult to have said friend cast a shadow over the character (and the cliff)? It might be over the top, but I think it'll make it look more imposing; like it's looming over her and all.

The cliff also looks a bit flat and empty, but that might be just me.

Regardless, it's really nice! :D


Pardon the intrusion, but: I think adding shadows beneath the grass (especially the sides facing the camera) would make it nicer, and the roads will look less flat. These would be the shadows casted by the grass hanging over the road, around its edges (or something like that). Also, the grass to the far right pop out a bit too much, in my opinion. It's too... neon-y.


Is it just me, or is the title off-centre? *cringes* >.<

I think you can add a silhouette of the main legendary there, like how Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald did. I mean, there is a main legendary right?

Or you can move the RMN logo (the hexagon) down to the negative space. Afterwards, centre the title and the like.
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