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Classic-inspired beat-em-up made in RMMV

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Screenshot Survival 20XX

Wow, thanks for the nom, InfectionFiles!

As for the research process, I started with photos, but that wasn't giving me enough, so I then did a video search for Edinburgh Airport. Luckily, there was a detailed BBC documentary on the place, so I grabbed that from YouTube, watched it a couple of times and grabbed screenshots for reference.

Screenshot Survival 20XX

author=suzy_cheesedreams
The pillar looks like it should be slanted slightly to the back/right


Does, doesn't it? Geometrically speaking, it's spot on, but the perspective of the room makes it look wrong. I'll have a play with it. Thanks!

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Yeah, he's a grumpy old bastard alright!

Screenshot Survival 20XX

Sorry it's kind of a large image (developing in 1024x576 for widescreen deployment), but here's my latest...



Just missing NPCs now.

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Appreciate the kind words!

Let's work on your game descriptions!

author=XBuster
Thanks PineBox :D
You're welcome!

We All Fall Down

Spent a bit of time with it now. The first time you see one of those mushroom creatures scurrying around is pretty creepy, and the survival mechanic is really solid. Can't find any more verminkind to kill around the farmhouse though?

[DEV TOOL] Comprehensive List of Reviewers/Feedbackers/LPers/LTers/Play Testers/etc

Please sign me up for play-testing and/or reviewing. I'd prefer it if it were reciprocal, though! (i.e. I'll play-test your game if you'll play-test mine.)

Let's work on your game descriptions!

author=XBuster
Action,RPG,Puzzle, and Adventure

Action, RPG, Puzzle and Adventure

Always put a space after commas (as in one of Marrend's corrections), and only use a comma before the word "and" when the "and" is being used as a conjunction (joining word) between two parts of a sentence. i.e. Don't use a comma before an "and" at the end of a list.

author=XBuster
Monster World IV-2 Engine(made in Game Maker).

Monster World IV-2 Engine (made in Game Maker).

Always put a space before and after a set of brackets.

author=XBuster
  • Real time day/night system

Real-time day/night system

This is a small one, and you can take it or leave it, but it's generally the convention to put a hyphen/dash between two words that are being used together as one adjective, especially if one of those words is a noun.

author=XBuster
Risky's actions with this powerful new weapon end up being so drastic, it causes a distant world to be affected.

Risky's actions with this powerful new weapon end up being so drastic, they cause a distant world to be affected.

Because the subject of the sentence, "Risky's actions", is plural, the matching pronoun and verb "they cause" should be used.

author=XBuster
"Half Genie Hero"

"Half-Genie Hero"

As above, with two words used together as a single adjective.

Hope that helps.

The RMN Skill Exchange

Offering:
  • Illustration: for splash screens, static battlers, backdrops
  • Music editing: I can turn most pieces of music into a seamless loop.
  • Proof reading: of dialogue or anything else (English teacher since 2001)
  • Japanese translation: I'm near native-level fluent.
  • Play-testing: for a straight, fair exchange

Seeking:
  • Play-testing: 'cause I need feedback to be able to keep making improvements to my game 'Future Ghost'.

If you can help out with just a little play-testing, I can help out with just a little of something from the above list. If you can commit to play-testing for me long-term, I'll do more of whatever it is you'd like me to help you with. I can also animate, but pixel art isn't really my forte.

Thanks for reading.