BROKENH'S PROFILE

Due to situations beyond his control, Ben has more idle time than he should have! "Hands" are the devil's playground and as such Ben is often drawing or diddling around in RPG-maker VX Ace to give his life a semblance of actual meaning.

A social introvert, Ben is NOT a social butterfly! However, he still desires to create forms of expression which incite genuine emotions, raucous laughter, and occasional deep thoughts. (Though often enough he misses that mark and ends up offending everyone instead!)

Gutter-Delve: The Closet...
Dark fantasy horror rpg with just a dash of cheesy camp and sexual innuendo!

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Gutter-Delve: The Closet Cases

author=EvilEagles
The portrayal of the female characters in your game is making them borderline sluts. There are ways to portray an RPG character's characteristics and personality. As of now, I doubt if they're coming off as what you wanted. If your justification for this is that they're all slutty whores, then yeah, fair enough. Because that's what the portrayal of them is screaming about.

author=BrokenH
If you peeps want to talk about the game I'm okay with that. But I'm not going to debate these unrelated issues anymore. I've seen enough games getting bagged on for their art styles and portrayal of genders to be tired of the whole issue.


This is relevant because, no offense, but at this rate it's turning into a third class porn game rather than an RPG. Are you sure that's what you want? For me, I don't. I'm here for games, not for porn.


We can agree to disagree. This is my last post on this matter.

Gutter-Delve: The Closet Cases

author=SorceressKyrsty
Have I not stated that sexualization is fine? Fanservice is fine, too. In moderation, otherwise it comes across as unappealing and off-putting. None of these characters reflect their personalities, they reflect what you find attractive. If you were making this game entirely for yourself that's fine, but you're sharing it and that puts it in the limelight for public critique. And it's not attractive, for the record.

And are you kidding me? You do realize the entire reason this debate exists is because games solely appealed to the male gaze for a very, very long time? A number of the examples you listed such as Raiden cartwheeling were done by the Japanese, who despite their love of hentai and tentacles do seem to have a more balanced scope in regards to women and men being sexualized. Western games, though?

I didn't have friends until I was around 16 years old because I loved videogames, and it was socially unacceptable. I didn't find people I could talk to videogames about until I was 18 because I am doing a University course specifically designed around games. I didn't get to geek out and enjoy videogames without the whole underlying debate over sexism and the male gaze BECAUSE I AM FEMALE. I had no peers who enjoyed the same things I did, so your 'missing of the old days' is your view. This debate and topic exists because exactly half of the world's population, until very recently, was completely excluded from games culture.

I am not a part of your geek subculture, or I wasn't until the last five years. And most women weren't. We were pushed into a tiny 'niche' group with pink swirly games and Barbie Horse Riding. The debate exists because women want to be included in that culture of videogames without feeling objectified or being submitted to harrassment. MEN ARE OBJECTIFIED, YES. But in NO WHERE NEAR the same degree as women are, and ALMOST NEVER as badly. A man with their shirt off is not the same as a woman with nothing on besides a vagina cup and an impossible shirt covering her nipples.

Female enjoyment culture like yaoi exists and IT SHOULD because women should be able to enjoy that sort of thing too. It was ok for gamer magazines to write about how they thought yuri between Lightning and Serah was hot, in an official publication, but imagine the freaking uproar that would happen if the same thing happened with the genders reversed ten years ago. THAT IS WHERE THE ARGUMENT IS. It's about sexualization in equal doses, on an equal ground, rather than it solely being women and one or two men.

I am not saying you shouldn't sexualize your characters, or censor everything and I have been saying that from my very first post. I am saying that it can be done tastefully, in an appealing manner, that fits the characters and context of the game. Hell, I read your character profiles and only one even slightly fits into the guise of someone who's sexually aware. You can have your short skirts and low cut tops and what have you but tastefully is the issue here. Your designs have no taste. They are obnoxious, not sexy.


And for the record, my avatar clearly states that I pair Cloud with Squall.


Say what you want,Krys. I'm done. I'm sure you have good points but defending your smut while saying I'm doing mine wrong comes off as misguided and one-sided to me. Maybe after I cool off I'll be able to view all this more objectively.

For the record,many of the concept arts I put up are a few years old. I just didn't have the time to crank them out quickly. Sometimes I'd draw a character one year and not get around to coloring that character until the next year. In that time the writing for the characters matured beyond the initial drawings for them. Aka, a person's "art style" can be drastically different from his or her "writing style". Not everything is uniform and perfectly aligned.

If you peeps want to talk about the game I'm okay with that. But I'm not going to debate these unrelated issues anymore. I've seen enough games getting bagged on for their art styles and portrayal of genders to be tired of the whole issue.

Beyond that, I get the feeling no matter what I say you're going to insist I'm wrong. I might not be right about that but when you come onto someone's game page being pushy and accusatory over some concept art well, how am I suppose to interpret that?

Again,you don't have to like my art anymore than I would like your kinks of choice. And for the record,all my characters "do" have sexual sides to them. I created them so I would know.


Gutter-Delve: The Closet Cases

author=Melkino
wow, that's a lot of
attempting to justify wonky-looking fap material

Seriously, the anatomy is pretty poor and just...not sexy. (unless broken spines are your kink or something...) Have you looked at reference photos of people doing various poses? There's only so much you can see at one time. Yes, men and women have different body structures, however, neither sex can break their spine to do those impossible poses. At the very least, reference photos may reduce the "skeevy nerd" vibe that's coming off of every single drawing of the female characters.

But if having a basic grasp of human anatomy is somehow the equivalent of being "politically correct" to you, well...

I'm kind of tempted to throw "white-knight" your way but that's no better than making accusations that someone who draws a certain way is misogynistic. As such, I'll let your opinion stand as valid criticism. We really need to start respecting people on all sides and stop labeling them. Let me extend the olive branch by not flinging around the "white-knight" stereotype.

Honestly, I grew up on capcom fighters and comic books. The truth is you're right. I wouldn't call everything I liked from that era "anatomically correct" "morally upstanding" or "philosophically stimulating". I simply enjoyed those things without letting any social/political agendas ruin my fun.

Is what I do just fap material? Maybe. (Obivously that's the case based upon your subjective point of view) But even if it is, what is wrong with that? Instead of going out with a camcorder and asking real women to get into exploitative poses for me I'm drawing imaginary ones. You can see that as "pathetic" or "loser-ish" but I see it as having at least a shred of integrity. Like or hate my art, no "real people" were hurt or objectified to create it.

Lastly I'm sorry, but it's difficult for me to take "offended people on the internet" seriously anymore. Hideo Kojima himself was called misogynistic for his female sniper design and the sorceresses in Dragon's crown was a "raging controversy" even though the male characters were just as disproportionate and exaggerated as she was.

If you don't like my work you don't have to support it. Need I say more? Are you even here to discuss my game? That's the BIG REASON to be here after all.

PS: Yes,words! They get across viewpoints! Literacy is good! As I recall, my opposition used a lot of "words" too!

Gutter-Delve: The Closet Cases

author=SorceressKyrsty
Just because there are issues in other countries does not mean there are not issues in the Western world, I hope you understand. My father pulled the same thing on me when I told him I was suicidal- "there are people starving in Uganda, how can you be suicidal?" Just because there are other people suffering does not make my own issues any less real.

I have no doubt I'm in a privileged position, even if I have gone from abusive household to abusive household. You cite the rights I have, but despite my ability to vote my country currently has a devoutly Catholic misogynist in power and our House of Representatives has all but one woman. My rights are being rebutted because people still hold the view that women are lesser than men. I don't doubt we are not physically equal, but many of us are intellectually equal, and can do the same jobs with equal prowess.

You are coping out by saying you have the right to portray women this way and they're objects anyway because they're in 'videogames', but you know what? That's not true. They are part of media, and media is representational of viewpoints. The lazy term 'it's just a game' doesn't apply any more, and never really did. If we're going to be trying to blame videogames for how they create violence, they can be equally called out for misrepresenting females.

These few examples you have mentioned are among the many hundreds like God of War, Duke Nukem, World of Warcraft, and a massive percentage of other mainstream titles. You are not unique in your portrayal. And that's where it's wrong, because it's the norm to oversexualize without a basis not even for the purpose of fanservice but for your own pleasure.

Stop citing Twilight, too. Twilight is extremely recent and part of the growing trend where women are able to find their voice as also being sexual creatures rather than all media conforming and appealing to men. Majority of media still conforms to men's viewpoints and attractions rather than it being an equal balance. Adverts meant to be selling to women have girls dancing around in their underpants, which makes absolutely no sense whatsoever.

I doubt I'm going to be able to sway your view since you've outright decided it's within your 'creative rights' to portray women like this. Thank you for continuing a way of viewing the world that makes it hard for me to have a good night out, since if I dress nice I'm immediately a target for men, makes it a scary experience to so much as step foot out of my house after dark, and have random guys in vans pull up next to me and ask me on a date. I'm not viewed as equal, I'm viewed as a conquest. And neither are the women in your concept art equal, because if they were, they'd be dressed equally as well as the men.
I'm not saying you're one of the people who would touch me inappropriately, or leer at me because I'm wearing a specific kind of boot- I'm saying your craft and your art is part of a culture that says that kind of behaviour is 'ok'.

I miss the old days,Krys. By that I don't mean when "sexy thong parades" were more dominate in comic books and I don't mean the era when games were horribly sexist. (Custard's revenge makes my stomach churn just thinking about it)

What I mean is there used to be a time you and I could simply have fun and "geek out" about our love affair with Persona 4 or Final Fantasy without either of us having to bring gender politics into the equation. There would be no political correctness (I'm holier than thou art because I believe THIS and you believe THAT!) and there would be no paranoid hysteria (Watch out for the MALE GAZE! It's everywhere!) Just good old fashioned adoration of a shared hobby.

I've noticed gaming journalism has been sensationalizing everything of late. "Misogyny" has become the cache phrase for everything that is sexy,heterosexual male fantasy, or "culturally non-American". Perhaps using the term "sexism" lost its' edge so journalists needed a new buzz word to hype the masses again.

And the people that post these types of articles on gaming sites know they've already divided the geek community with elitism,political correctness, and gender wars thus having hundreds of us argue in the comments section gets "them" more traffic, more revenue, and more hits. Aka,we're both the victims and the end products of this scam to "divide,conquer,and exploit" the geek/gamer sub-culture. (And I do consider our niche a sub culture of sorts even if it's a bit more mainstream these days)

For the record, I admitted I haven't walked in your shoes and you might face certain issues other western women do not. I'm not sure if you read that and dismissed it or merely skipped over it by accident. Again, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.

However, I take offense when you say I somehow support a culture of leering rude men who make you uncomfortable walking home at night. If those "men" cannot differentiate their "fantasy" from their "reality" perhaps they're still "boys".

If it makes you feel better, I've been on the reverse side of this. Aka, I've been out walking to the corner-store for a soda when I've had women suspiciously look over their shoulders at me and quickly cross the street. I realize I'm kind of tall but it still hurts my feelings when a woman "assumes" I'm somehow out to get her. (Again,we go back to judging a book by its' cover)

I also do not relate to or approve of game protagonists who are similar to Kratos and Duke Nukem though I admit to enjoying these games as guilty pleasures. (Minus Duke Nukem Forever. I watched the alien impregnation/merciful abortion/mercy killing "hive level scene" and decided not to touch it with a ten foot pole. Yes, I'm offended by things too!) I was likewise somewhat offended Kratos in particular was very misanthropic and had no respect for life what so ever. I certainly understand the epics of ancient Greece were violent and even gory at times but playing as a roided up neanderthal jock asshole certainly didn't make me feel "empowered" or "better about myself".

So why did I endure the first two GOW games? I thought the environmental design and boss fights were wonderfully crafted. Beyond that, the games were quite the eye-candy back in those PS2 days! But I digress. My point is us guys don't always get the best "heroes" to play as either.

Believe it or not, I have been thoroughly reading your posts. I just don't agree with your accusatory attitude. Unless I'm mistreating and harming living breathing women you don't have a right to pass judgement upon me. You say my art could create a subliminal mind-set but you can apply that same rant to just about everything. To which I ask "In lu of this,are we no longer accountable for and responsible for our own actions?" The same argument could be directed at a kid that shoots his brother in the leg with a real gun after playing COD. Should COD be held up as the culprit or do we need to look into the boy's upbringing,friends,and mental health to deduce what triggered such behavior? My point? For every one person who seemingly "flips out" while playing a game,listening to a song, or looking at illustrations, thousands more people mentally ingest those things just fine without becoming homicidal,suicidal, or sexually predatory. Why exactly is this? It's because certain people have serious psychological issues in the first place. Should we censor ANYTHING that could potentially set someone off? What a colorless and lifeless world that would be.

Lastly, one reason I live alone is the deep rooted fear I wouldn't be the best partner in a relationship. Getting hurt stings but hurting someone else is agonizing. I think most of us get over being hurt rather quickly but when we hurt someone else the grief and regret sticks with us forever. When we get into relationships we're opened up to both kinds of hurt. I personally live by the code it's better to live alone than with a romantic partner. At least when I'm alone the only person I can hurt is me.

PS: If you're tired of Twilight I could just start posting Yaoi hentai and yaoi fan fiction done by squealing fan-girls. Fiction which isn't exactly the best representation of "real gay men". Whether you want Batman paired with Robin or Cloud paired with Dante and Sephiroth, I can totally hook you up! By the way, I'm not personally offended by yaoi or airbrushed Adonises atop of romantic novel covers. I'm just implying men get objectified too.(And to a certain extent,sexual objectification is even healthy and natural.)

Bug Report: Rope in prison

Actually,I think it might still be an imperfect save. Aka,not all the variables and switches have been triggered up to that point. I may have to play through it up to that event myself. (Or choose which variables to start out on & off)
I apologize for the inconvenience. I "do" have a save but sadly it's near the end of the game in a different location than the one you are at presently.

Bug Report: Rope in prison

author=Gourd_Clae
I'm curious if there's any way you could make me a save file for right before the hole? You know, just set me to begin right before it with a suitable party and all that jazz?

I wouldn't mind,Clae. How would I get that to you though? Can save files be uploaded and downloaded just like the game itself? If so it's the least I can do!

Gutter-Delve: The Closet Cases

author=Gourd_Clae
Welp, welp! Help, I picked to not go down the hole after I used the rope and now I'm stuck as in the shiny thing is gone and it won't let me go down. And I happened to save right after messing it up so yeah...

Really? Crap. I'll see what the problem is.

PS: Yeah,bummer. If you choose "No,Joe" the shiny disappears. I'm fixing it now. Guess that review will have to wait.

During my play thru I didn't think to choose "no". Seems I screwed myself there. lol.

Gutter-Delve: The Closet Cases

author=Marche100
Hey, I'm willing to try this out. I've actually had my eye on this game in the past, but never downloaded the demo. Honestly, I never really took a good look at it, but hey, the game is out, now! I'll give it a go and give you some feedback as I go.

I have to say, it sounds like a plus that you made leveling up faster so that the narrative can move along. I'm a person who tends to like RPGs with little-no grinding and enjoys a game for its story, so hopefully this aspect lives up to my expectations. We'll see...



There are so many games on RMN clamoring for attention, I'm not offended when someone overlooks mine. lol. We have a lot of talented people here and I've already seen artists that can draw circles around me. (The art for Feral moon is especially spectacular)

You totally hit the nail on the head though. I know people have work,school,and kids so I really didn't want them to have to grind for hours on end. I was able to play through my own rpg in two days and when you compare that to "mainstream rpgs", mine is tiny and very quick moving by comparison.

Gutter-Delve: The Closet Cases

author=Gourd_Clae
I'm about to move on to the Police Station currently. I'm enjoying this on the whole so far! The rape undertones that seem to reoccur are a little off putting, so I'm not sure how to feel about them. I do plan on reviewing this though so I'll probably have formulated an opinion by then. Good job so far though!

Deidre's arch is pretty heavy with that theme. Honestly, it's difficult to address the issue perfectly,Clae. If you told me "You could have done this scene better" or "That particular monster encounter wasn't needed" I'd simply nod my head in agreement. As writers, we can "try" to empathize with someone who's been through something we have not but only "the greats" pull it off without a hitch. As an amateur writer, I kind of wonder if I should have even attempted it.

That said, it feels pretty good to have the game done! I do love my characters and I did want to tell their story! (Even if they are not the most politically correct bunch!)