DRAGNFLY'S PROFILE

It's not an excuse, it's a reason:) Excuses are to divert blame away from where it belongs while reasons are to educate and promote understanding on why things turned out a certain way. -wisdom from an office guy

Regarding the birthday thing, I was in a cool conversation once discussing if a game's birthday is more similar to the launch or the announcement.

One side basically said that the game being announced is like the birthday, and release is like it reaching adulthood (thus, development is the game "growing up"). The other side suggested that development cycle is like it's still in the womb, that being born is being released, and the various updates that follow, as well as the right up until the game is old and barely remembered, is the life cycle.

Anyway, happy birthday.

I love how, in the top image, she's cautiously watching the download button.

Oh, god what type of girl will win Lynette's heart? I can't picture her getting anything other than some poor whipped squire.

I guess there are lots of Italian RM developers. Cool.

I played it. The English isn't great but at least I could understand what you were meaning. There's a non-English mistake when talking to the girls after making your first decision, where she has a "1" at the end of "walk". It's also funny how you can just walk right by them without talking to them LOL. It's funny to imagine that happening.

Make_it_MagiK already mentioned the tinting issue.

There's another issue after you go through the locked door. If you try to open the menu, the game locks up.

One English problem I need to mention- the man says "Don't steal nothing from my house!" This is called a double negative, where two negatives make it positive. So he's really saying "Do steal something from my house!", which is the opposite of what he means. It should be "Don't steal anything from my house!"



The mapping has some problems, especially with the shadows and edges. Never trust RPG Maker's auto shadows. They aren't reliable.

It's an interesting game and the characters look nice. I think this is the first time I've seen a child character wearing black lipstick.

But the game certainly needs more polish. I suggest playing some other RM games and seeing what they do to get an idea of how to map better. I also recommend making a post on the forums to ask if somebody can look over your text to improve the English. Nobody should be mad about the bad English but since you decided to release the game in English you should also see if somebody can help you improve it.

Keep at it.

I almost had a good related joke here but turns out one letter is off:(
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source: Aria: The Avvenire